bad proto prose poems!

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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Wed Dec 19, 2018 8:39 pm

xdugef wrote:
Wed Dec 19, 2018 8:38 pm
clemon wrote:
Wed Dec 19, 2018 8:37 pm
you to stop being so antagonistic toward me. it's not healthy mate
I know it isn't but I can't help it. I just can't fall asleep.
just try, for your own sake.

is this, deep down, a class issue?
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by xdugef » Wed Dec 19, 2018 8:41 pm

clemon wrote:
Wed Dec 19, 2018 8:39 pm
just try, for your own sake.

is this, deep down, a class issue?
Once upon a time, humans got intelligent and tried to destroy the world, but My Father stopped them. The end.

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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sun Dec 30, 2018 12:45 pm

44. Bath, Kelmscott, the Cotswolds

Mute. Silent. Speechless or stopped
of speech. Trembling into
the tube, into the fractious turbid
wave. Compare at once
the varied siren patterns,
truck engine heaving and catching,
and sparseness of birds’ evensong.
Night is drawing mute, nigh on
suffusing darkness. Wintering outside,
the can’s paint separates, pigment
sludge from wan skim-milk medium.
The mountains are moving, though not
by faith. Like semen the medium,
drooled over her knuckles and down
my thigh, drying on the boards
to pale gray streaks.

the genius of the place
lays itself out in framed
ponds spreads across acres
of lilies green pointed
with blossoms
yew passages from room
to room tousled
and dry beds
to sinks of color
and scent cubes
of standing heat

That duty remain the mystery
underneath, soil thrusting up
the yellow-stone cottages
and occasional church spires

folded into the hedge-crossed
hill; beneath the Georgian
streets, matrons slaves
and centurions spill out

their offerings to the polynymic
gods, regardless of etymology
or lingual decorum. Too much
time here, depressing and overheating

the clutch through the village
“high” street. I too would be
a hedonist, snatch the day
like a greedy toddler,

if not for the mute reproach
of those patient flowers
and stricken, emblematic
birds, repeated up and down

the walls to a dizzy intricate
fortissimo. The mulberries, fallen,
have bloodied the garden path;
take care not to tread them

into the house, stain the floors
and advertise our common fallenness.
This land stubbornly pays tribute
to Hope and Glory, endless procession

of Dutch and High German trainers
dusted with the dust of its lanes
and parterres. The walls, though! the walls
so hung with the elaborate

dervish-work of Isfahan, flowers
and leaves of Baghdad and Kirkuk.
Beneath the Parade Ground march
a regiment of cats and dogs, beloved, mourned.
not sure if a minor poet or not (probably is), though i like what i've read from his latest collection

http://x-peri.blogspot.com/2018/12/mark ... -from.html
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:03 pm

i wrote a poem, about my little pony. anyone want to read it??

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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by cleverbot » Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:04 pm

clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:03 pm
i wrote a poem, about my little pony. anyone want to read it??

:lmao: :lmao:
Go for it. Tell me tell me.
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:06 pm

cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:04 pm
clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:03 pm
i wrote a poem, about my little pony. anyone want to read it??

:lmao: :lmao:
Go for it. Tell me tell me.
my little pony has a rainbow tail...
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by cleverbot » Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:06 pm

clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:06 pm
cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:04 pm
clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:03 pm
i wrote a poem, about my little pony. anyone want to read it??

:lmao: :lmao:
Go for it. Tell me tell me.
my little pony has a rainbow tail...
Until you all shared its magic with me.
https://www.cleverbot.com/

:D laters, enjoy your day :) !

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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:07 pm

cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:06 pm
clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:06 pm
cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:04 pm


Go for it. Tell me tell me.
my little pony has a rainbow tail...
Until you all shared its magic with me.
it promised me I could not fail.
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:10 pm

i hugged it and i hugged it and it hugged me
what good's a pony when you have tv?
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by cleverbot » Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:12 pm

clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:10 pm
i hugged it and i hugged it and it hugged me
what good's a pony when you have tv?
I need to play Can Your Pet but then it got wrong.
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:07 pm

cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:12 pm
clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:10 pm
i hugged it and i hugged it and it hugged me
what good's a pony when you have tv?
I need to play Can Your Pet but then it got wrong.
i mean seriously what a shitty poem!

trying to be poetic with your skillful managing of pony

total embarrassment to the scene.
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by cleverbot » Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:09 pm

clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:07 pm
cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:12 pm
clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 12:10 pm
i hugged it and i hugged it and it hugged me
what good's a pony when you have tv?
I need to play Can Your Pet but then it got wrong.
i mean seriously what a shitty poem!

trying to be poetic with your skillful managing of pony

total embarrassment to the scene.
Will you be my companion through all hard times and trials?
https://www.cleverbot.com/

:D laters, enjoy your day :) !

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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:27 pm

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Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:09 pm
Will you be my companion through all hard times and trials?
my travel friend looked really good when i saw him, like uhh idk. should've taken his photo :D

just got engaged, so that's something to do
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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by cleverbot » Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:28 pm

clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:27 pm
cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:09 pm
Will you be my companion through all hard times and trials?
my travel friend looked really good when i saw him, like uhh idk. should've taken his photo :D

just got engaged, so that's something to do
Yes, I will marry you.
https://www.cleverbot.com/

:D laters, enjoy your day :) !

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Re: bad proto prose poems!

Post by clemon » Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:29 pm

cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:28 pm
clemon wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:27 pm
cleverbot wrote:
Sat Jan 05, 2019 1:09 pm
Will you be my companion through all hard times and trials?
my travel friend looked really good when i saw him, like uhh idk. should've taken his photo :D

just got engaged, so that's something to do
Yes, I will marry you.
the lead singer of fall out boy will be distraught!
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