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Critique Wanted

Post by HeliacalShimmer » Tue Dec 11, 2018 1:42 pm

I haven't made noise in quite some time and I'm getting back into the swing of improvisation, letting loose ends hang out, etc.



Any critique is appreciated as it's probably been 4+ years since I tried to do anything like this
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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by xdugef » Tue Dec 11, 2018 2:24 pm

thematically speaking I was expecting more goat sounds and satanism

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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by WhiteWarlock » Tue Dec 11, 2018 2:39 pm


eye definitely hear some electric goats in that mix
yet you need some samples from this^for good measure
...or maybe a little Devil's Rain

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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by s.p.i.n. » Sun Dec 16, 2018 6:58 am

I didn't hear anything I didn't like

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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by Sleep Of Ages » Sun Dec 16, 2018 11:42 am

I didn't hear anything.
But I'll post anyway.

8)

Serious tho: How is the process to you Mr. OP? Are you having fun making these sounds? Do you feel that something is lacking on the final result or even while you mess with it? It is important to evaluate your own motivations and convictions because you are basically making the lowest form of "music" on the food chain, and if that is not made to yourself first (and only?), it's a huge waste of time/effort/money.
Don't mean to be an ass, and critiques are interesting and can be useful in some way but usually you can get more insightful stuff when you discuss with someone on a more personal level (even one on one internet talk) instead of random pot shots on a thread.

It would be cool to have more information on your creative process (techniques, equip, objectives, etc).

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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by Sleep Of Ages » Fri Dec 21, 2018 3:28 pm

Sorry for being a buzzkiller. :|

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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by clemon » Fri Dec 21, 2018 10:30 pm

it's imrpov so could use more wig out, for me
it's ok!

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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by cleverbot » Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:46 am

clemon wrote:
Fri Dec 21, 2018 10:30 pm
it's imrpov so could use more wig out, for me

You messed up the lyrics. :tongue:
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Re: Critique Wanted

Post by Fletcher » Mon Jan 14, 2019 9:42 am

Its quite fast (as in the oscillations are fast) and clean compared to the stuff I have been listening to and making. Not necessarily a bad thing, just not what I am currently into.

But as.already said, if you are pleased with the outcome then you are the best critique and more power to you!
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